Monday, May 2, 2011

Evaluation & Response to Evaluation Questions

How effective is the incorporation of my main product and ancillary texts?

Working in our group, researching and looking into ancillary texts, we were able to apply all our ancillary texts which comprised of our radio advert, magazine/poster ad and our web pop-up together with our TV advertisement. We wanted to ensure that our style of advertising really caught the consumers attention, so we decided to run a simplistic sophisticated style throughout our advertising campaign. We looked at a variety of real media texts and noted some influences that apply the same theme of their brand/product throughout the rest of their advertising scheme. We wanted to maintain the idea that although the image was simple it still created that scense of luxury , hence our brand name 'Indulgence'.

As part part of the television advertising package, we also had to produce and research into web pop-up ads and radio advertisement. Researching into the forms of web pop-ups from real media texts, we were able to show some examples of pop-ups that were effective and we could use as influence when developing our own popup. After establishing what style of popup we were going to produce we made certain it was relevant and suited the rest of our advertising campaign, conforming to our simplistic, effective, yet sophisticated style of advertising. We felt overall from our feed back that our web popup was effective and we were pleased that it still maintained the class and sophistication we waned to convey.

As well as producing a popup ad, we also researched and produced a short yet effective radio advert for our product Indulgence. During research we were able to find some valuable influences from some major brands such as McDonalds, Haagan Daz and Budweiser. Taking the research into account we were able to note some aspects of our influences that we could use for inspiration. In group discussion we finally came up with a final idea for the radio advert and what it should conform to. When producing the radio advert, we made certain we still again maintained the same advertising style we have used throughout our advertising campaign. From the feedback have gained into the radio advert, the comments were all positive and we felt we have been able to deliver a clear message to the audience about our brand. We have successfully managed to use the radio advert to continuously promote our product after the television advert.


What have I learnt from the audience feedback?

It was important for us recognize our target audience while researching and before we began on the production of our television advert and the ancillary texts.
In the research stage we wanted to establish our main target audience, so we set out creating a simple and effective 'target audience' questionnaire, asking a variety of people about television advertising and hot chocolate. We found out that our target audience was mainly aimed at woman which created an intersting respone when we showed the advert to a male population who overall enjoyed the advert with positive responses and said that although it was clear it was female orrientated that they would also purchase the Hot chocolate beverage drink. I found that the questionnaire helped us find out what would be the most effective and popular, so we took this into consideration when developing our advert and product.

We needed some information on market research so we also created a research questionnaire that allowed us to establish more information on our selected target market that we found out from the target audience questionnaire. I learnt that being able to find valuable market research allowed us to recognise what the consumer wanted and and preferred; and from this we applied the information into the development of our television advertising campaign.

We gathered some comments on our final pieces of the TV advert, Radio advert and magazine ad. We felt it was necessary to be able to gain some form of evaluation feedback from other people and especially the target market. We found that we generated mostly positive feed back on our television advert, with one criticism mentioning there needs to be more focusing shots on the character making the storyline clearer. We immediately took this into account and applied a number of shots that effectively helped make the outline of the plot clearer to the audience. Looking at our radio advert feedback which again was possitive we managed to establish that we successfully applied our idea to the target audience.

From the feed back we got from our magazine advert, was positive. We used again the same advertising style theme to continuously make the product memorable toward its audience. We felt from this feedback we didn't need to change any aspects of the magazine advert as it complied with our specifications and overall appealed to the audience.
I learnt from the radio adverts feedback, we have successfully managed to appeal our product towards any audience through spoken word. We felt pleased that the feedback we got was positive and allowed us establish that the radio advert worked in the sense of being able to promote our product through the radio.

In what ways does my media product use, develop forms and conventions of real media products?

To ensure our product used and developed to meet the forms and conventions of real media products, we have taken the necessary steps and changes to allow our advertisement campaign to meet the standards of real media products. It is important for our advertisements to meet these aspects, as it will allow us to show the use and influence of real media products we have researched into. Also mentioning the other research and planning we have completed to to help us develop and meet the forms and conventions of other real media products.

Looking at the forms and conventions we researched into, I feel we have met these in several ways.
It is important to fully grasp the forms and conventions, which initially are followed by most globally successful advertising firms/businesses. For me to be able to recognise the most valuable forms and conventions used theme as an aid in which I can produce an effective advert using my full initiative. We have managed to continuously mention the brand name throughout our campaign over and over again to really emphasis on the promotion of the products name; this effectively becomes memorable towards the consumer. Another aspect was we deliberately used a well-known popular song, that not only suits the persona of the brand but also helps sell the product and again becoming memorable towards its audience. As well as not to mention the name of the brand itself 'Indulgence' and the catch tag 'Cacao Parfaite', that was picked to become recognizable and easily recalled.

Our television advert uses a simple plot that we think gets to the point of what we are trying to imply about our product 'Indulgence'. Using the correct character for our advert was very important as it immediately allows the audience to realize the context and target audience of the advert; throughout the plot, I feel that it has provided the correct information for our product allowing the audience to establish what we are trying to sell. The only thing that we had criticism on our advert was not using enough quick shots of the character. Looking into this we saw this had a flaw in the advert and didn't allow the plot to clearly come through. Which we changed and received positive feedback. We wanted to use some form of transitions between some of the shots to add a variety of special effects to the advert, to grab the audiences attention. We used this at the start of the advert as our brand logo appears, zooms out and fades away. Again we used transitions between all the shots in the dream sequence, applying slow motion and fade outs from different angles to really emphasize the a 'dream' like sequence that would really catch the audiences eye and become memorable towards the brand name. Another form we met was the use of shot styles. The variety of styles enable the audience to see the characters reactions and feelings which we have focused on to ensure the audience can relate to the emotions of the character after a long stressed day at work. This is effective as allows the consumer to relate to the products use and then wanting to try it; from this also allows the view to be called into action... getting up and wanting to purchase the product almost immediately. Finally I feel we have connected with our audience as we have gone to every length to meet the specifications and forms and conventions of real media products in the advertising industry.


How did I use media technologies in the construction and research, planning and evaluation stages?

Using a variation of different media technologies in the production stages of our media product gave us a valuable amount of help and information during our task.
Using the internet as the most used form of media technology, has given us a vast amount of information that we were able to use in all stages of our advertising production. Having the ability to use the internet, we used it as a source of help for much of our research. Such as being able to throughly look into the definitions of television advertising, theories, influences on music/advertising and the most important being able to explore the media forms and conventions of advertising. Using the ASA website I quickly able to establish some research on regulations on advertising, which were taken to note when coming up with out plot. Also using wikipedia we were able to have in-depth information about the advertising industry and also about different parts of the world. YouTube was very helpful as it allowed us watch and research a vast number of examples, idea's and influences throughout our research and planning stages.

Using the correct media technology equipment was important to us as we thought this would reflect on our overall quality of production and work. Using the best quality HD cam-recorder we were able shoot all our television advert in 1080p high definition. Using this gave our advert a clear picture nearly on par with professional standards. For me being able to have a very experienced knowledge on the use of Apple Macs, I was able to use my Mac in the construction/editing of our TV and radio advert. I was clear on the editing tools such as iMovie which I used for last years AS production, that enabled me to quickly and efficiently start and finish the editing of our production. Although we did have a slight problem with my iMovie, as the version was 08', and notoriously didn't have a slow motion tool. As we needed this tool to enhance our dream sequence I purchased the up to date iMovie 11' and was able to use some of the new tools to improve the production of our advert further more.

Saturday, April 30, 2011

Feedback on our Radio Advert

As a group we decided it would be best to get some feedback on our radio advert broadcast that we created, in order to do this we showed the advert to a number of people around our area and took in some thoughts and opinions. We wanted to make sure that our advert did exactly what we wanted it too, and this was sell our hot chocolate. Here are some reactions to our radio advert.

' I really enjoyed it, it was quick and straight to the point.'

'I liked how you advertised it by using a womans voice to promote to your target audience'.

'I think it was excellent as some radio advert go on for too long and bore you to tears. But I liked yours because I knew exactly what you were trying to promote as soon as it came on. Well done.'

We welcome constructive feedback as it allows us if needed to make changes to our advert and try our best to cater to everyone's needs. By advertising our hot chocolate at its most effectiveness.

Friday, April 29, 2011

Ancillary: Indulgence Radio Advert


This is our Radio Advert we have created as part of our Ancillary task. We used a womans voice in the radio advert because we felt it would appeal the best to our target audience (women). If we had used a male voice we could be seen as contridicting ourselves with our target audience.


As we create these advertisement tasks we wanted to keep with our main theme, class and sophisticaiton. We felt if we kept with the same theme throughout our campain it would become more of a symbol the the audience. They would be able to pick up straight away who we were and what we were trying to promote.


As in our television advert the women went into a dream state of mind as if she was in paradise. So we decided it would be best to stick with that theme in our radio advert and keep the atmosphere at a tranquill state. This we feel helps again to symbolise what our product actually is about. Finally we decided that in order to promote and sell our product at its full potential we wanted to add that little bit of class into it. This we feel went well with our female narrator. She added a sence of temptation to the product witch is key when advertising. Because if your advertisement does not go with your product, sales will not commence.

Wednesday, April 27, 2011

Feed Back on our Television Advert

These are some of the comments we have had back about our television advert about our hot chocolate product 'Indulgence'.

' I really liked the editing involved in your advert. You used the music really well in it too. Well done'

' The music used in this works brilliantly with what you want to get across'

'I liked the fact you used a really nice setting at the end of the advert. It makes me want to go out and get this product. Well done guys'

We also got some constructive improvements that some people said would help make our television advert better than it already is.

' I really enjoyed watching your advert but I feel that it was a bit confusing at times, with more shots of the lady in screen would work well'

We took this into account and made some more shots of our actress in screen to make the storyline clearer. We then showed our advert to the viewer again and they said this.

'That is a lot better, I now no exactly what is going on, thank you for listening to me'

We felt it was important and necessary to show and get feed back on the finale production of our advert, so if needed we could change any aspects of the advert that we got from this feedback. After receiving positive feed back and making one or two changes to the advert to make the plot clearer we finally felt pleased and happy with the overall outcome of our commercial.

Indulgence Full Original Commercial



This is our final 2minute 5second long advert, which is the original that was used to shorted the 30 second short version.

I am delighted with the final and overall production of our advert, after completing a variety of research and planning, we feel satisfied that we have managed to a produce an effective advert. We succeeded in entertaining the audience in the way we intended to. The use of the slow motion in the dream sequence has worked very well as it has implied our idea of 'total bliss'. As well as not to mention the ability to capture the snow at the correct time has given the advert an overall professional aspect and ability to wow the audience and grasp their attention. I feel that our advert meets all of the most important factors that it needs to be able to promote and sell the hot chocolate to the target audience as we have managed to imply our idea of what emotion and reaction the consumer will have once drinking the chocolate. This is our unique selling point of Indulgence that we allow the consumer to achieve cocoa perfection and its even so good... 'you could be dreaming'.

Wednesday, April 20, 2011

Indulgence Short TV Commercial


We originally had a 2:04 minute long online version for people to view. But as we have to make our advert suitable for global expansion we needed to drastically cut down the 2minutes 4seconds to around 30 seconds, so it could be broadcasted on television, as a TV Commercial. Reluctant that we might loose the story plot of the advert if we cut it down, we made sure as we selected the most crucial shots and scenes of the advert to ensure we still had the ability to express the story of the character and imply our product towards to audience. I feel that we have successfully managed to keep the plot of the advert as it is still evident that the same events occur in the corresponding order.

It is seen that some companies will broadcast longer versions of their adverts online or may first show there original long version on TV in a break after a highly rated TV programme such as XFactor or the Superbowl and then later broadcast the shorter version. For instance the new 'Lucozade advert' is around 30-40 seconds when broadcasted on the television but has invited you to watch the full version of the advert on their website/or YouTube.

Monday, April 18, 2011

Magazine Advert Feedback

When we created our magazine advert we wanted to allow the target audience to give us some feedback on what we were producing. We handed out our magazine advert to some of our target audience and asked them to comment on what appealed to them the most about it. Here are there comments.

'I really liked the simplicity of the magazine advert. It dosent crowd the page with inappropriate bits of text and images.'

'I liked the way you have kept to your original theme by using the black background and similar text.'

'I love how upper class it looks and how it matches your sophistication theme. Really nice to look at aswell.'

Not many products can pull off a really plain and simple design. But with a hot chocolate drink you seem to have done it really well. Brilliant'

We would like to thank the audience who commented on our magazine advert as the comments we got were really positive and helped us get an idea on what the target audience were looking for.