Feed Back on our Television Advert

These are some of the comments we have had back about our television advert about our hot chocolate product 'Indulgence'.

' I really liked the editing involved in your advert. You used the music really well in it too. Well done'

' The music used in this works brilliantly with what you want to get across'

'I liked the fact you used a really nice setting at the end of the advert. It makes me want to go out and get this product. Well done guys'

We also got some constructive improvements that some people said would help make our television advert better than it already is.

' I really enjoyed watching your advert but I feel that it was a bit confusing at times, with more shots of the lady in screen would work well'

We took this into account and made some more shots of our actress in screen to make the storyline clearer. We then showed our advert to the viewer again and they said this.

'That is a lot better, I now no exactly what is going on, thank you for listening to me'

We felt it was important and necessary to show and get feed back on the finale production of our advert, so if needed we could change any aspects of the advert that we got from this feedback. After receiving positive feed back and making one or two changes to the advert to make the plot clearer we finally felt pleased and happy with the overall outcome of our commercial.